death-is-forever's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starry Sky]

I totally hear the "feel good" vibes that Netsky or any Monstercat song would have. It's just missing the hard hitting elements to make it either one of those and I appreciate it more for that.

Regardless this song speaks to you in it's own language. Full of emotion while having some dissonance to it, which makes it it's own.. and after reading the back story, makes me feel like that has projected from your own personality. This just makes it all the more beautiful.

Am I over-analyzing? Maybe, but that's just me being me.

On a side note, if you ever need a random ear that won't judge you for what you have to say, PM me. Sometimes the best person to talk to is a complete stranger. :)

I wish you luck and happiness!

Teckmo-X responds:

Yeah you got the concept. Pretty much it's smooth without the dubstep and all the drops. It's simple but like I said only had a little bit of time to compose something. Thank you for your kind thoughts!

[+Scales+]

Been a while! Thought I'd check in on ya! Still killing it I see!

gray1 responds:

holly shit. dude. yeah its even worse man im working on an album for sure now.
thanks for checkin up on me man. thats ironic i was just thinking about your old remixes

[-= With the Wild (RMX) =-]

I really like this song, and it's structured very well. All the instruments fit together well, but I can't bring myself to give it a 5. It may just be the instrument your using for the drop, but it just seems out of key from the rest of the song. :p
Overall it's a really great piece, that just bothers me, that's all. lol

Hope to see something else of yours up on the top of the list. :)

TheBiocide responds:

Fair enough, dude! Everyone's got opinions :)

Thanks for the feedback! Hope to hear more from you in the future - hopefully, with a 5 star review as well ;)

[Drowning(sample)]

Nice!

This is pretty catchy, and I've always been someone to like music with a sorta "rainy day" emotion to it, which this definitely has.
Only thing that is weird about this it the buildup seems out of sync which, hey if that's what you meant to do then cool, but it caught me off guard. lol

I'd like to know why all your stuff from 2011 so far is rated so low, none of it is really bad at all.

Anyway, keep it up man, I'm digging it!

Mr-green-apple responds:

dude if you only knew how dark it is inside this soul...most these songs not even really of my emotion...if i made stuff how i really felt no one would want to listen... yea build up off for some reason i couldnt get it right and that the best i could get it.. could fix but dunno usually just make 2 minute songs go like song A.D,D. Reason for my ish being so low is cuz i piss people off by criticizing there music correctly and their feelings get hurt....just tellin the truth and im the first to give out advice from the years that i have lived in fl studio and the love of making vibrations... dont really care what most of the dumbasses think on this sight cuz they dont even know what they talking about. I put music on here for the fortunate few that hear it and enjoy. itd be nice to be big as someone like bounce but im not quite there on the talent lvl. he is amazing. but yea i know i deserve a lot more credit then im due but it dont matter i do it for the love of it

[yo(Dj Sasson)]

Sweet!

I like this a lot, it's not your typical "Hey let's go party" kind of dance. It's definitely got a mood to it. :)

Only real complaints are the buildup kind of suggests a BIG drop, which wasn't as hard as you expect, and the end is very empty, but I'd assume you were going to put something there if you finish it.

Overall though, it's a great start, you should keep working on this though, it could turn out really well.

Mr-green-apple responds:

yea just messin around on fl pretty much just put this out to show a girl i know what i was up to. this like the main melody with like a build up to it...kinda the middle of a track deal...put it together in like 20 mins so it pretty basic ya know clap hihat kick deal

[N-Ergy(WIP)]

Sweet tits!

My favorite part is the arpeggio before the dubstep still. Definitely one of your best, keep it up broooooooooosssskkkkiiiiiiieeeee!

p.s. that dub sounds cool even if it is wack! lol

NeXtross responds:

Thanks man i really think that Dub is fitting for it, such a mixed up track i really wanna up the awsome level lol

[My Dad is Better Than Your Dad]

I like!

This is really nice bro! I've done a lot of this myself, and was actually in a band and played shows with music like this.

I like the fact that you mixed some interesting synth with that 1st fret deathcore kind of breakdown. Did you record the guitar yourself, I mean whoever was playing knows what they were doing.

The only complaint is the guitar quality, which is a little drown out. If you would like I could give you a few pointers on guitar recording since that's what I do nowadays for local bands around here.

But hey, keep it up, I like this and hopefully you decide to do something like this in the future!

ZachPayne responds:

Thanks for the well written review man! You got to play music like this live? Damn your lucky! Ya I recorded everything and wrote the song myself. I don't have very good recording equipment thing so that's probably why he quality sucks lol. I'd love to do more songs like this actually, I use to make mostly this and other types of metal but nowadays I make trance and techno music :p go figure. I may wanna make anothr song like this though I have a couple all tabbed up lol.

[Pokemon G/S Lance Battle Final]

YES!

Nintendocore! haha
Love it! Plus the guitar work is great. and I like how the original song takes it turns in and out.

I have to give you credit, I know how much trouble it is to record all the guitar and bass. :P

Burn7 responds:

Thanks. It really is a pain, especially since my recording equipment gives me shit and doesn't record in time so every time I record I have to go in and sync it up in time. It's incredibly annoying.

But thanks!

[Hall2010 - You Shine So Bright]

Pretty creepy dude!

This is as creepy as it gets, I feel like I'm wondering through hell itself. haha
and the screams!

Very nice. :)

l-l-u-m-a-n-s responds:

Thanks man . Glad you liked it . I can make some dark stuff . ^-^ . Thankyou for listening . I should review your other songs, whenever I am feeling better . ~Cheers

~ l l u m a n s

[Eternal Happiness]

Hmmmm????

As a guitarist, I appreciate this. :) It's got a nice sound, kinda dark, but I like it. :P

Reminds me of soundgarden honestly, but I like it.

Keep on keeping on man!

Clayford responds:

Thank you.
I'm glad another guitarist can feel the strings sing to them as well.
The irony is in the title.
:)